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Query Clinic No. 3

This weekend, I’m critting two queries because of some upcoming pitch contests. Usually, I’ll only post one a week. Onto the query…

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Query Clinic No. 2

Original Query: Declan runs to his foster parents to say he loves them, he’s sorry, and he hopes he’ll make it out of the Federation alive.  If he doesn’t than he was either hung for treason or eaten by a … Continue reading

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Query Clinic No. 1

Original query: He was so naïve to a world he never believed existed. But everything he doubted before will prove to be more than just reality…

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